A day I can never forget

I am Benny .The singing   inspector  came last week.His name is  Raymond . He where is Thick stockings and knickerbockers. He has a round red face and eyes like blueberries and golden curles.
He was not a nice man and screamed at them. I was so  afraid  .I did not no what’s to sing.He said what can you sing .
 
I-and Charles can sing pretty poly . So sing that Raymond said. Hi sent us out the rooms because it was so bad. It was the worst day of my life.

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  1. Madisonh1 May 2019 at 23:55

    Hey Marc.
    Your story of Benny interactions and feelings of the singing inspector,but I don't understand why your post was so short? But I hope you improve on your blog posts

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  2. JoshuaK12 May 2019 at 00:02

    Hello again Marc. I just read your blog and was interested in it and its contents. I wonder if you think differently of school today?

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  3. Simonek2 May 2019 at 00:03

    Hey Marc! I liked the way you introduced yourself as Benny and went straight into the story! describing how the singing inspector looked and got all the details and facts in! I would love to read more about Benny's side of the story. Are you going to write more?

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